Does this sound good? Posted by Na on Mar 22, 2009
I've developed six classes that I can do at schools, parties, etc. I was wondering if people could read the info and tell me whether they sound good and if there is something missing... The classes are listed here:
http://puppetsinmelbourne.com.au/courses.php
Thanks!
http://puppetsinmelbourne.com.au/courses.php
Thanks!
Re: Does this sound good? Posted by LJ on Mar 22, 2009
Looks to me like you included everything that the schools may need for information. Good luck with this venture!! and HAVE FUN!!
Re: Does this sound good? Posted by Jon on Mar 22, 2009
Sounds good to me, concise but informative. Best of luck with these classes.
Re: Does this sound good? Posted by Ron G. on Mar 22, 2009
Nicely done, Na! You've done a great a job of presenting this information, and making it sound interesting to prospective clients. I can't really think of anything that you could add to make it better. The PDF files and FAQ are very professional.
Ron G.
Ron G.
Re: Does this sound good? Posted by Na on Mar 22, 2009
Thanks guys! Happy to see I'm on the right track - now to get some business!
Re: Does this sound good? Posted by Bhanu on Mar 23, 2009
Na,
Good planning...please send the info to schools & voluntary groups working
with the community. This may bring in the clients. Also, some hospitals dealing
with stress & mental condition. Puppetry can be used as a therapy.
Wish you all the best for your sessions.
Cheers
Bhanu
Good planning...please send the info to schools & voluntary groups working
with the community. This may bring in the clients. Also, some hospitals dealing
with stress & mental condition. Puppetry can be used as a therapy.
Wish you all the best for your sessions.
Cheers
Bhanu
Re: Does this sound good? Posted by Gabriel G on Mar 23, 2009
It sounds great, clear and concise without being overly decorated.
Nice and good luck with them!
Nice and good luck with them!
Re: Does this sound good? Posted by Na on Mar 23, 2009
Thanks all! I'm hoping it will impress someone who called on the weekend and wanted to book a class for their school. Fingers crossed!
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