Skand,
You can get a lot of help and suggestions here to improve your work, BUT the bottom line is...are you happy and how will your target audience react.

Nice remark that helps to focus. Yes, you're right th goal is th audience and not the puppeter only.

From my experience. you will always see something that you could have done better (in your opinion) and kids don't really care about the "little" things. They could care less if the eyes are looking in different directions. If it's a puppet and acts a little goofy, they will eat it up.

Thank you!

WOW!! what an improvement, you have done a brill job with the eyes, i personally think that the eyes have a great deal to do with the personality of the puppet, good focus aswell, he is really looking at the camera!! so what did you do to change the eyes??
Ben.

And thank you too!

i totally agree, the fact that the eyes where squinty before is actually alright if the charector is the same, kids will love him whatever he looks like!!