So I finished editing the day of shooting outside. I hope you enjoy and as always constructive criticism is welcome.

Nice string together.  I do think that in editing I would have used a splash sound effect for when he jumps into the fountain.   There is really no "payoff" to the video but there is some really nice puppetry work and your use of real objects with the puppet are great.

Shawn are you saying that you needed more of a conclusion of the journey. I would use a splash sound effect but not sure where to find one any ideas.

Thanks for the critique it is the only way I will get better.

Search for "free sound effects" in Google: http://www.a1freesoundeffects.com/ that is just the first result. You can also find sound effect CD's at your local music store as a rule. Or try Amazon!
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cool thanks Shawn maybe I can throw up a new version with a splash any other ideas.

The unexpected was really amazing!  Liked the Oscar in the bin bit - the puppetry is well done and the character very cute!

Maybe the bin bit could be developed - someone shouts something grouchy from inside the bin to scare your puppet off - only a suggestion! 

Helen

Thanks Helen good idea. I'm glad you liked the Oscar bit.

Gompie the crazy drunk dude is the unexpected.

I thought he was in it too .............

Nice collage of work, filming in public with a puppet.  I am hoping to do that myself at some point.  It really makes puppets real when they walk around in the "real" world. 

The spontaneous response from the guy with the drink really makes me laugh when I just think of it.  Also in that scene I like how you make the puppet drink the bottle.

Thanks for sharing......

Daryl H

Hey thanks guys. I love hearing the feedback.