I've just finished a script and I'd like people's opinions of it. I've written scripts before, but this is a children's show and I haven't done kids scripts before. It's called "Og the inventor - Og invents fire".
Also, I'd like more experienced performers to help me work out how long the show would run for. I've aimed for 30 minutes, but it's likely it will run under since I always overestimate time.
I'm going to sell the script, so I'm not posting it here: please PM me with your email address and I'll send a copy of it.